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Rethinking Justice: A Rhetorical Analysis Proposal

Aaron Holmes
Sep 22
2 min read

For my Rhetorical analysis project, I plan to analyze Adam Foss's TED Talk "A Prosecutor's Vision For A Better Justice System." As a Criminal Justice major, I chose a text directly related to my field. Foss delivered the talk at TED2016 and speaks from his experience as a prosecutor in Boston. His main argument focuses on whether prosecutors should always pursue the harshest consequences available or consider alternatives that may give young offenders an opportunity to improve their lives.


The intended audience seems to be broader than just those that work in the criminal justice field. Foss speaks to members of the general public in this TED Talk and he mentioned throughout about the decisions that prosecutors make affect the money of everyone sitting their through taxes because tax payers dollars are being sent to fund a year in detention for a teenager which he said was upward of one-hundred-thousand dollars. This makes the audience important because Foss has to explain issues within the justice system in a way that people without a legal background can understand. His experience as a prosecutor gives him credibility when discussing how decisions within the system can affect someones future.


The exigence or the main purpose of this talk was the concern over how people handled in the criminal justice system, particularly young people after they commit a crime. Foss raises the question of whether giving someone a criminal record and pursuing the maximum punishment is always the most effective response. His purpose is not only to inform the audience about the power of the prosecutor, but to persuade listeners to reconsider what justice could accomplish. Foss describes his argument as advocating for a system that offers opportunity rather than simple punishment.


There are also several contraints that shape how Foss communicates his argument. Criminal Justice reform can involve strongly different opinions about about punishment, accountability, rehabilitation, and public safety. Because of this, Foss has to present his ideas in a way that acknowledges the seriousness of crime while still encouraging his audience to consider alternatives methods to to traditional prosecution. Another constraint is the TED Talk format itself. Instead of writing a lengthy academic article for criminal justice professionals, he has to make his argument understandable and engaging for a broader audience.


I believe this text will be an effective subject for Rhetorical analysis because I can examine how Foss uses professional experience to establish ethos, personal examples and stories to create pathos, and reasoning about the consequences of prosecution to develop logos. I can also analyze how his choices are shaped by his audience and the setting in which he delivers the talk. This connects directly to our discussion of Bitzer’s rhetorical situation because the message is shaped by an exigence, an audience capable of responding to the issue, and constraints that influence how the argument can be presented.

 
 
 

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Sep 23
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Hello Aaron! I think its smart that you chose your Rhetorical Analysys Paper on something that correlates with your major. I agree with you when you stated that the TED talk seems like it would be for a broader audience. I feel like everyone should listen to as least that specefic podcast episode. Many people don't understand how much of their hard earned tax dollars go to such small infractions. I think Foss's constraints are very serious and that he has to be very careful when voicing his opinions because many peope could assume he has his mind made up on this topic or he has a controversal view in the justice system. However, overall I strongly believe you did…

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Aniah Sinclair
Sep 23
Rated 4 out of 5 stars.

I recognized you pointed out the conflict between punishment and rehabilitation, especially when it comes to younger offenders. I agree that someone's age, background, and mental health can be important factors to consider, but I also think age alone shouldn't determine how someone is punished. For example, if a 15 year old commits a serious crime like killing someone, I think there should still be accountability because being young does not automatically mean they don't understand that what they did was wrong. At the same time, their mental health, background and circumstances should still be considered when deciding how the situation is handled. I think that would be an interesting part of your analysis to look at especially with how…

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chatadvcomp
Sep 23

I think choosing a text that relates to your field is a strong way to start. I was obsessed with TED Talks during COVID. I think more people should engage with them. As you stated, this is a great choice for the assignment because of the structure and your ability to dissect the different pieces that make up a rhetorical analysis. I will have to engage further with Foss' talk because this is a very interesting topic to me. I think it is a serious concern that so many young individuals are incarcerated for first-time offenses, especially when they are misdemeanors. Does it surprise you that a prosecutor had this take on the system? It always surprises me when people…

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